Talk:Gunnery Sergeant ErisEn

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ThirdPass:

“Released by parole” (Parolled )
"The punishment has departed" (Released)
This doesn't seem right, shouldn't it be
 "Released on parole" (Paroled)
 and something that actually makes sense for Released?